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星と魂の発見隊 2話 はじめての依頼へ

Discovery Teams of Stars and Souls Chapter 1 Episode 2 To the First Mission

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    ButDoesItRunLinux

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    So Togekiss wanted to beat them up, then went for outright (attempted) murder, and is now settling for a look of disappointment on their faces? To the point of making a deal with them over it??

    These things may all fall under the rubric of "getting back" at the protags, but of course they are not equivalent, and to switch willy-nilly from BAD to merely kinda-bad without so much as acknowledging the change (let alone giving a proper motivation for it) makes for a pretty poorly-written antagonist.

    This would have worked a lot better if the whole sky-drop part were edited out, not only because then there wouldn't be this inexplicable downgrade in Togekiss's villainy, but also because the attempted murder (and the subsequent cheering) felt inappropriately dark for this comic to begin with.

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